out of this world

I will


I will love you
I will  love you  always
Like you are mine
You will be mine
With all of me
Every moment
I will adore you
I will let you play in my thoughts
Only you will occupy my thoughts
I will make up silly thoughts about you
I will  dream  of  you
I will create lovely dreams about you.
In those dreams
I will dance with you in the rain
and  I will  kiss you
When I pick up my pen
I will write to you
Sweet words
truthful  words
will  I write  about you
I will Scribble your name on paper
I will draw you
Paint you
Make sculptures of you
Tattoo your name on my  skin
Even on my heart’s tablet will your name be engraved
I will sing to you
Sing for you
Sing about you
I will smile 
I will smile  always
Because  your name will pop up in my mind
every time I think happy  thoughts
I will let you into my world
My world will be built for you
I will love you
I will make you mine
In my mind
Without  your knowledge.



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7 thoughts on “I will

  1. Adeleke Julianah on said:

    Lovely lines as is your style lady Amity.
    Heartfelt and deep romantic words.

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  2. this is sweet… too sweet
    the words leapt out of the page at me…
    if I were the one being written about, I will want to know..such sweet words shouldn’t be kept to oneself.
    beautiful writing
    this line “I will let you play in my thoughts” pretty ingenious. painted a vivid picture
    well done Lady Amity

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  3. Good. Really good. Weldone Amity.

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  4. Wow Amity! This is gotta be the most ‘out of control’ post I’ve seen since ’16 was heralded in! Its simply just insane, sick;….in a pretty cool kinda way and its got me spinning too! D-Dang! Am totally awestruck! LOL

    In the words of Lucy Van Pelt, ‘A heart filled with love is never heavy’, but this heart rigght here feels pretty heavy to me….this is absolutely too much to bottle in! The Narrator oughta let it all out…scream and shout from the rooftops! Cut loose and tell it on a mountain, get it off of his/her chest; let it be known to his/her Beloved, none apologies tendered! ‘Never apologize for showing your feelings. When you do, you’re apologizing for the truth; surmises Jose N.Harris!

    Plus, and most importantly; the greatest playwright that ever walked the Earth in the person of Sir William Shakespaere; who coincidentally is also a renowned master in the things and matter of the heart had this to say ’bout love and loving during the course of his lifetime and who better anyhows….. ‘They do not love, that do not SHOW their love’! Thus, this Narrator oughta take a really bold step and step out of ‘Mind-loving’ and you just never know, your Beloved may actually be feeling the selfsame way! Now pray tell…’Wouldn’t you just wanna know’?! I SO darned would! LMAO!

    ‘I Will’ is an amazingly composed, highly romantic piece of poetry dripping all over with feelings that I can just taste those sweetest feelings on my buds and I aint talking bout Coca-cola! LOL You brought this too well Sweets; you look a vision beguiling…in romance! LMAO! Well done! 👉😁

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