out of this world

Ray of hope

Silent morn light from

the golden sun rays filters

through this darkened path.


Lonely souls come out

to dance to the beautiful

tune of the morn light.


They hope and pray it

shines all day,  for when it leaves,

their feeble souls bleed.


They dread the darkened

path and the cold hand of gloom

that encompasses. 


Though they walk the path

 a million time, their feeble

souls yearn for the morn light.


A ray of hope for

lost wandering souls seeking 

true companionship.


*this is  an experimental work using  the three lines and 5-7-5 syllables haiku blended with concrete poetry style*



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2 thoughts on “Ray of hope

  1. Adeleke Julianah on said:

    Ray of Hope!
    We sure need it!
    Beautiful poem lady Amity…

    Liked by 1 person

  2. yes Julie, we really do.
    thank you.


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