I sailed his murky mind
Like a ship upon the troubled water
Finding solace in his darkness
Oh my gosh… That’s beautiful. I totally get that. And I love the title. Great job!
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Now you make me blush😀
I sailed her murky mind
Like a ship upon the troubled
Finding solace in her darkness
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That’s really great. Well written and powerful too. Thanks for sharing 🙂
Thanks for reading and taking time to comment too.
These are the strongest
Three lines I’ve ever read!
It was my first assignment from writing201 class
wow! love it!
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