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The rain dropping on the rooftop  was melodious to her ears

As if hypnotized by the plitter platter,

out of bed she jumped

Not caring what she wore.


She ran out blindly into the street scantily clad

soaked she was,  by the rain’s  splatter

she swiveled  to the rhythm  of the rain

she danced carelessly, she danced wild

she felt  free.


There he was, looking out of his window

mesmerized by the rain’s  plip plopping

he saw her dance, he joined in too


splish, splash, splosh,

stamp, stomp, twirl

with no care in the world,

they  danced like lovers  to the rhythm of the rain.




8 thoughts on “RAIN DANCE

    1. So I read you post on tumblr but couldn’t comment? Damn, although you both make it seem so amazing to be caught up in the cold long embrace of some downpour, that ‘m almost tempted to think I want to know what it feels like… I think I’ll still rather just settle for the bliss that comes with just imagining it.

      That piece is sooooooooo lovely! Made me fall in love with rain. Welldone! 😀

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  1. I am totally in love with this piece. ‘M sure ‘ve mentioned before? You’re amazing and inspiring too!

    Please.. Pretty beautiful please, don’t stop writing! God bless your wonderful heart.

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